I have enjoyed reading Courtney Milan’s internet postings, and I heard a lot of great things about this story, which evidently was her foray into self publishing. However, as with her previous short story, I found it somewhat lacking.
Unlocked by Courtney Milan
(2011, Regency Novella)
Grade: 3.5
Ten years after he tormented and teased Lady Elaine Warren, Evan Carleton, the Earl of Weston has returned to England to try and make things right. But Elaine is not so ready to forgive. She’s learned to live with the jokes and insults, but the experience has made her wary of anyone who seems too good to be true.
It’s hard to grade this novella, because it seemws like a book that was squeezed into a novella length. The premise was fascinating, but there was a lot of character, plot and relationship development to be crammed into a relatively small space. To the author’s credit, she was able to bring the characters to life in a small number of pages, but where she faltered was in their relationship. There just wasn’t enough space to explain why the hero and heroine were suddenly “in love” – and the last thing this short piece needed was a very lengthy love scene near the end. All in all, a noble experiment that didn’t quite work.
Short stories are difficult – I want to like them since they work so well with my limited time availability (and attention span) but it’s very hard to find satisfying ones. I also tried It Happened One Season during my vacation and had many of the same issues with it.
Karen Wheless
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